Showing posts with label Amrita Pritram. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Amrita Pritram. Show all posts

Wednesday, October 10, 2012

"The Birth of a Poem" by Amrita Pritam

"The Birth of a Poem" by Amrita Pritam (1968)  translated by G. S. P. Suri

Short Stories of the Indian Subcontinent
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Amrita Pritam
1919 to 2005



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"And then it occurred to Raji that writing a poem was like stealing an apple from Eden.  Adam stole and apple and lost his paradise forever. A man who writes a poem may keep his mind, but a part of his mind is forever banished from this world."

There is no literary culture with roots older than that of India.   I will always admire Edmund Burke for telling the English that they had no right to govern a region whose culture is much older than theirs.        Some of the writers featured will be internationally famous, such as Salmon Rushdie, Saadat Manto,  and R. K. Narayan but most of the writers I post on will be authors on whom there are no prior book blog posts.    There are numerous books and academic conferences devoted to exploring the colonial experiences of India and Ireland and I will look these stories partially as post colonial literature.   My main purpose here is just to open myself up to a lot more new to me writers and in this case most will be new to anyone outside of serious literary circles in the region.  Where I can I will provide links to the stories I post on but this will not always be possible.   



Amrita Pritam (1919-2005-She was born in Pakistan) is considered the first prominent Punjabi woman  writer.   She wrote poems, essays, novels and short stories.   Her work is highly regarded in both India and Pakistan.    Punjab before the partition of  India was in Northwestern India.    There is now a Punjab state in both Pakistan and India.   The Punjab region is home to some of the world's oldest civilizations.    There are around 100,000,000 million speakers of Punjabi today.    Some of the worst impact of the partition of India was felt by the Punjabi people whose homeland was divided up by Pakistan and India.    When India was partitioned Pritam moved from Lahore in what is now Pakistan to India. She was of the Sikh faith and this is why she moved to India.    She won many literary awards and is known as the voice for Punjabi women.    She married and divorced.   She worked for several years for all India Radio and edited for 33 years a literary magazine.   She was also fluent and wrote in Hindi.    Toward the end of her life she became a follower of Bhagwan Shree Rajneesh, an internationally known spiritual teacher.

"The Birth of a Poem" is a very beautiful story that enters into the creative processes behind the writing of a poem.    The story begins with the poet staring at a blank sheet of paper.  He thinks of the words of Sartre  "When I write I try to capture a certain beauty in a web of despair".   Raji, the poet, tells himself that he tries to capture despair in a web of beauty.   Raji can find no despair in his heart. I love this line "He felt like a vigilante in a cemetery".   Ravi tries to ponder the origins of poems, they are like earthworms, born of hot soil and out of heated minds.   Raji thinks on and on regarding the nature of poetry.  He needs to find something or someone that can agitate him deep enough to produce a soil from which poetry could arise.  He finds it in a lust for his wife's fourteen year sister.  (I think we need to be less judgemental in our reaction to older men and  young girls in reading older short stories from the Indian subcontinent  as women were considered marriageable at 14 and old maids at 21.)  

"The Birth of a Poem" is a very interesting story for its account of the creative process.    I read it in 
Best Indian Short Stories, Vol 1,edited by Khushwant Singh.   As far as I know it cannot be read online.

Mel u
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Sunday, April 24, 2011

Amrita Pritram ਅਮ੍ਰਿਤਾ ਪ੍ਰੀਤਮ -Three Stories by Leading Punjabi Female Writer of the 20th Century

"Stench of Kerosene" (5 pages-translated by Sardar Khushwant Singh-1960)
"Wildflower" (4 pages, 1959-translator unknown)
"Shaiban" (4 -pages, translated from Punjabi by Nirupama Datt-1970)

Stories of the Real Lives of Women in the Punjab Region of India and Pakistan


Amrita Pritram (1919-2005-She was born in Pakistan) is considered the first prominent Punjabi woman  writer.   She wrote poems, essays, novels and short stories.   Her work is highly regarded in both India and Pakistan.    Punjab before the partition of  India was in Northwestern India.    There is now a Punjab state in both Pakistan and India.   The Punjab region is home to some of the world's oldest civilizations.    There are around 100,000,000 million speakers of Punjabi today.    Some of the worst impact of the partition of India was felt by the Punjabi people whose homeland was divided up by two countries.    When India was partitioned Pritram moved from Lahore in what is now Pakistan to India. She was of the Sikh faith and this is why she moved to India.    She won many literary awards and is known as the voice for Punjabi women.    She married and divorced.   She worked for several years for all India Radio and edited for 33 years a literary magazine.   She was also fluent and wrote in Hindi.    Toward the end of her life she became a follower of Bhagwan Shree Rajneesh, an international known spiritual teacher.

"The Smell of Kerosene" is set in the rural are of Punjab.    The central characters are a happily married couple and the man's mother.    All of  them lived together, as was the normal practice.   The couple met by chance and man at once felt love for his future wife.   She told him to go to her father and arrange a marriage which he does.    Seven years go by and the couple have no children.   They are very happy and accept this.   The mother in law does not.   In the eight year of marriage the mother in law finds a second bride for her son in the hope she will have a grandchild.    The man feels nothing in his heart for the new wife but she does become pregnant.   (spoilers ahead)   His first wife is heart broken even though the husband tells her he is married in his soul only to her.    Every year the first wife went on a trip to see her old girl friends from before her marriage.   This year her husband has a very bad feeling about this and begs her not to go.    She does not return when expected.    A friend comes to the house and advises them that the wife dosed herself and her clothes in kerosene and set herself on fire.    Shortly after this  the second wife has her baby.   The baby is presented to the husband.   He screams that the baby has the stench of kerosene about him and clearly will never accept the child.    

"Stench of Kerosene" can be read HERE

"Wild Flower" also is a story about the lives of women and how they are effected by the marriage customs of Punjabi.    A very old man who works as a servant    The man's first wife has died.   At the ceremony honoring her death an old friend of his offers him his young daughter in marriage.   I will leave the rest of the story untold other than to quote these very sad lines:
“What are you reading, Bibiji?” Angoori asked me one day as I sat under the tree.
“Do you want to read?” I asked her.
“I don’t know how to read.”
“Why don’t you learn?”
“No.”
“Why?”
“It is a sin for a woman to read.”
“Is it no sin for a man?”
“No, it is not.”
“Who told you all this?”
“I know it.”
“Then am I committing a sin by reading?”
“No it is not a sin for a woman of the city. But it is a sin for a village woman.”
"Wild Flower" can be read HERE
"Sahiban" is a modern retelling of an old Indian parable of star crossed lovers driven apart by the partition of India-You can read it HERE

I recommend all these stories without reservation.   If you will read only one then read "Stench of Kerosene".  

I will soon post on an amazing short story, written in English, by Mrinal Pande from New Delhi, "Bitch".   It is about a four year old girl married by her parents to a dog to ward off an evil eye they feel has been put on their family.  

Mel u




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